Comments for Adrienne Matos http://adriennematos.edublogs.org Another excellent Edublogs.org weblog Fri, 30 Jan 2009 15:40:13 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 Comment on Flying Car by shelbybartholomew1 http://adriennematos.edublogs.org/2009/01/30/flying-car/comment-page-1/#comment-5 shelbybartholomew1 Fri, 30 Jan 2009 15:40:13 +0000 http://adriennematos.edublogs.org/?p=5#comment-5 Your paragraph is very good. It has 8 sentences, and explains a lot about the flying car. Your paragraph is very good. It has 8 sentences, and explains a lot about the flying car.

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“prevent different kinds if STDS such as herpes, chlamydia, gonorrhea, and many more. Condoms can prevent pregnancy” and “long, people” needs punctuation.

Your transitions are excellent, as are your choice of a video for EC = +1.

Overall, a really good essay.

]]> Comment on Once A King Always A King by ritajeanstangherlin http://adriennematos.edublogs.org/2008/10/28/once-a-king-always-a-king/comment-page-1/#comment-3 ritajeanstangherlin Thu, 06 Nov 2008 19:15:32 +0000 http://adriennematos.edublogs.org/?p=3#comment-3 You have made an interesting trailer to a book with a contemporary theme. I cannot assess the music because I do not speak the language, but we did discuss in school that the lyrics were appropriate, and that you had deleted anything that would be objectionable language, when translated. Many of your images had text as a part of the image, so the limited text slides work. An excellent trailer. You have made an interesting trailer to a book with a contemporary theme. I cannot assess the music because I do not speak the language, but we did discuss in school that the lyrics were appropriate, and that you had deleted anything that would be objectionable language, when translated. Many of your images had text as a part of the image, so the limited text slides work. An excellent trailer.

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